HAIKU KORNER

for the clueless.

Haiku (俳句, ^?) listen (help·info) is a mode of Japanese poetry, the late 19th century revision by Masaoka Shiki of the older hokku (発句, hokku^?), the opening verse of a linked verse form, haikai no renga. The traditional hokku consisted of a pattern of approximately 5, 7, and 5 morae, phonetic units which only partially correspond to the syllables of languages such as English. It also contains a special season word (the kigo) representative of the season in which the renga is set, or a reference to the natural world.

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What is Haiku?

Haiku is one of the most important form of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables.

understand? 5 syallables, 7, then 5. great fun.
here we go.

The air con is cold
Freezing, shivering we are
Please give me a hug =(
by monster


The morning sun rose
The day is long and deary
Recess we await
by monster

Stomach is so deep
Empty with air, fully filled
Shit! i'm damn hungry
by stickz

Long apples grow with seeds
Onwards down it hangs freely
Long gone in tummy
by stickz

Chemistry, how nice
Is nose flaring called lying?
Chocolate like sweet coal
by sitckz

I want a mentos
Is there one so kind to me?
Feed me ok, thanks.
by monster.

The grass is lush green
Blue and yellow, merged as one.
Creatures are dumb bears
by stickz

(i like this one)
Starch or sugars? err
To chew, or not to chewing?
I think, Chew Zhi Wei
by jw2242, monster, stickz

(jw2242's attempt. didnt turn out a haiku 0_0)
The stick counts
The cow yawns
The bear talks
I'm surrounded by retards!
by jw2242

(AND THE VERYVERY FUNNIEST)
*note: coarse language present. read at your own liablity.
U fuckin cheebye
Motherfucker chao chee bye
My lanjiao damn big
BY ELMO!

haha its really nice to read. all poems inspired by the day's happenings. PLEASE APPRECIATE EACH HAIKU OK THANKS. dont flame it, we just want constructive critisim. constructive praise better actually.
monster.